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Animegears
10-10-2005, 01:51 AM
http://www.imageviper.com/pages/show_album.php?aid=154

These are some of my drawings some you have seen and others you haven't. Please feel free to critique them I would like to get better but since I don't go to a class I need pointers.

DVD-Man
10-14-2005, 03:41 PM
I really love some of your stuff AG... my fav is still definately that blue little guy you drew up... think you should do some more color ones like that; maybe some more charcacters or something..... :mrgreen:

Like that you tried a different concept with that 3D looking bike thingy..... like all the different tones to it, but think you could fine tune the wheels/tires a bit more.... seems like you concentrated less on those.

Btw.. check the album comments out... you have some it seems! :P

Animegears
10-14-2005, 03:47 PM
Awesome! Thanks GB I appreciate what you had to say. Yeah with the wheels on the bike I got kinda frustrated and rushed them :lol: Thanks for the comments guys! Oh and CCD the one that you said you liked was a sunset on the Nile. I drew it sitting on a cruise ship. :)

aclays
10-14-2005, 04:39 PM
it's all infinitely better than anything i can do :lol: i wouldn't know what to tell you as far as advice goes :lol:

Animegears
10-14-2005, 04:44 PM
Just point out things that you notice could be improved. I don't care if you can do something better or worse than it. If you notice something that I can work on just say it. :P Especially if there is an inconsistancy between pictures. Like constantly unbalanced sides and such.

DVD-Man
10-14-2005, 05:58 PM
Especially if there is an inconsistancy between pictures. Like constantly unbalanced sides and such.


:duh:



Oh and CCD the one that you said you liked was a sunset on the Nile. I drew it sitting on a cruise ship.


Rich hippie! :x

thatguy
10-14-2005, 09:45 PM
I wrote on your site:


I think my favorite would have to be the demon, I love the coloring in that on

As for improvements....maybe make the characters on some of them non-animeish. Example, the demon picture. That picture is totally badass, but I think the spiked anime hair kinda throws it off a little bit.

Animegears
10-15-2005, 12:51 AM
Especially if there is an inconsistancy between pictures. Like constantly unbalanced sides and such.


:duh:



Oh and CCD the one that you said you liked was a sunset on the Nile. I drew it sitting on a cruise ship.


Rich hippie! :x

The cruise was paid for by the government. It wasn't a fancy cruise. More like a boat ride with a bunk. We didn't pay a dime for it.

Yeah my bad on the consistantly inconsistant stuff. :lol:

Animegears
10-15-2005, 12:58 AM
I wrote on your site:


I think my favorite would have to be the demon, I love the coloring in that on

As for improvements....maybe make the characters on some of them non-animeish. Example, the demon picture. That picture is totally badass, but I think the spiked anime hair kinda throws it off a little bit.

Yeah, since I never took an art class I learned by drawing what I could find. I was really big into anime at the time and decided to try and draw my favorite characters. So often times I will revert back to the spiked hair as it is easier for me to draw.

But I wholeheartedly agree with you that I should change that.

The Duke
10-15-2005, 04:03 PM
That's awesome work. Love the Akira Bike

Crazy Crazy Doctor
10-15-2005, 10:02 PM
Haha, all this is getting me to want to draw more :lol:

I should probably post KILP 3...

DVD-Man
10-16-2005, 04:33 PM
:headbang: :headbang: :headbang:

Animegears
10-17-2005, 10:26 AM
Go for it dude! Thanks for the compliment Duke!! Glad you like the bike. About time someone recognized it. :P

DVD-Man
10-17-2005, 10:40 AM
About time someone recognized it.


Didn't I give you comments on it!? :?

Animegears
10-17-2005, 10:48 AM
Yes you did and I thanked you for it but you just said 3-d bike looking thingy you didn't know it was from Akira. :P I said recognized not noticed. You noticed it but he recognized it. :)

DVD-Man
10-17-2005, 12:15 PM
Oh ic.. :oops:

Animegears
10-17-2005, 12:19 PM
np :)

Crazy Crazy Doctor
10-17-2005, 02:25 PM
I recognized it, but I couldn't quite place where it was from. That was one weird show :lol:

Helios
10-17-2005, 02:54 PM
I never watched it. I saw some clips and looked through the graphic novels and decided it wasn't my style.

The Duke
11-12-2005, 06:36 PM
When I first saw the movie I had a few attempts at drawing the bike (it's such a cool bike). Didn't come out near as good as yours though Animegears.

They're all great, though the ones that stood out for me were the bike and the landscape/sunset one (the forth one).

What did you use to colour the CABlood picture?

Animegears
11-14-2005, 11:10 AM
:) Glad you liked them Duke. I love that bike from Akira. I so wish a company made them. But to color CABlood I used Photoshop 6.0. That's the best drawing I have ever done I think.

camperz0
11-18-2005, 05:32 AM
They're nothing special.

I know it's hard, but focus on trying to be cleaner with the lines. You're not sketching trees here.

Animegears
11-18-2005, 09:50 AM
Right on, I'll keep that in mind thanks for the input.

DVD-Man
11-18-2005, 04:05 PM
:lol:

Animegears
02-14-2006, 05:40 PM
This isn't a drawing or fancy but it's all that's left of a wallpaper I was making about 3 years back.

http://www.imageviper.com/displayimage/11300/0/ImpD3.jpg

The Duke
02-26-2006, 12:29 AM
Ooooo. . . Why don't you finish it off?

Animegears
02-27-2006, 10:48 AM
I didn't finish it then because people just ragged on it so I figured why bother. I've been thinking about trying to do something more with it again.

thatguy
02-28-2006, 06:03 PM
who ragged on it?-

DWells
02-28-2006, 06:57 PM
I like it...

Animegears
03-01-2006, 09:33 AM
who ragged on it?-


Some people from a forum that I went to a long time ago. I don't think it is even around anymore.

Animegears
03-10-2006, 02:32 AM
http://www.imageviper.com/displayimage/29222/0/D3dfn.jpg

Well I didn't do much to it. Can't honestly remember anymore what I had originally intended. But this is done for now. Maybe I'll tinker later but messing with this gave me some interesting ideas...

DWells
03-13-2006, 10:57 AM
Maybe a ltittle lighter on the filters, makes it a bit tought to see. Needs a contrast/brightness tweak. Cool concept.

Animegears
03-13-2006, 01:18 PM
I wanted the marine to be hard to see but I agree that it should be a bit lighter on the Hell knights.